Hola Mary, tu glog es muy interesante. Me gustan muchas las fotos. El video está bien, although I would have prefered if you didn't read as much. May be, next time you will do a video trying to speak without a written text. I would like to advice you on some mistakes that I found in your glog that are important. Be carful with the use of the proper verbal personal and with the gender agreement. These are some of the mistakes: 1. Use of the third person instead of the first person when you are talking about yourself: "Tiene 19 anos", "Tiene el pelo largo", "Tiene un hermano". 2. Use of the masculine form in the adjectives when you are talking about you: "irlandés", "alto". 3. "intraste" instead of "INTERESANTE". 4. "Me gusta mucho los deportes". You should say GUSTAN. Rememeber that when the thing you like is plural, you need to change GUSTA for GUSTAN.
I hope you can think about your mistakes and be aware of them. They are small things but if you do not correct them now, it would be much harder to try to do it later on.
Ah! y gracias por la canción, it was nice to hear some music with the glog.
Hola Mary, tu glog es muy interesante. Me gustan muchas las fotos. El video está bien, although I would have prefered if you didn't read as much. May be, next time you will do a video trying to speak without a written text.
ResponderEliminarI would like to advice you on some mistakes that I found in your glog that are important. Be carful with the use of the proper verbal personal and with the gender agreement.
These are some of the mistakes:
1. Use of the third person instead of the first person when you are talking about yourself: "Tiene 19 anos", "Tiene el pelo largo", "Tiene un hermano".
2. Use of the masculine form in the adjectives when you are talking about you: "irlandés", "alto".
3. "intraste" instead of "INTERESANTE".
4. "Me gusta mucho los deportes". You should say GUSTAN. Rememeber that when the thing you like is plural, you need to change GUSTA for GUSTAN.
I hope you can think about your mistakes and be aware of them. They are small things but if you do not correct them now, it would be much harder to try to do it later on.
Ah! y gracias por la canción, it was nice to hear some music with the glog.
Marta